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Posted: 05 November 2004 at 5:26pm |
If there is anyone here that critique's websites or interested in doing so could they please send me a private message please?
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Posted: 11 November 2004 at 12:38pm |
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Anyone like to give me a hand out?
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Posted: 11 November 2004 at 4:32pm |
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alt.www.webmaster will critique a site, but you'll need lots of bandages - lol.
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Posted: 11 November 2004 at 8:26pm |
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You will receive comments if you post the address here
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Posted: 12 November 2004 at 4:57am |
Its part of a college project. The address is http://www.llbean.com
The following headings are from the point of view I should look at the site.
1) Content
2) Speed
3) Flexibility
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Posted: 12 November 2004 at 10:23am |
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At first glance looks great. Looks A-Ok in Firefox. A few suggestions however:
- You have a piece of JavaScript that displays different things
depending on browser. It would be better to print out the
different HTML depending on browser server side, as it would mean
lesser page size, and wouldn't affect non JS people.
- Page size at 80kb seems a little too large, you might want to
think about relying more on your style sheet, theres still a lot of
repeated HTML code you can get rid of.
- Bottom copyright notice needs cleaning up a bit, if you can,
try to keep it all on one line, same font size and font. If you
can't keep to one line, shape it like a pyramid centered in it's cell,
it would probably look better.
- Not sure about the links at the top going red when the mouse hovers
over them, doesn't show up clearly enough. Maybe think about
making the box they belong to change colour?
The things I liked about it:
- Looks very proffesional and clean
- Content is concise
- Image styles are consistent
- Products are easy to find
In short, a fantastic looking site, but you need to trim page sizes down.
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Posted: 12 November 2004 at 10:45am |
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I'm not sure where your getting 80 kb from, the homepage in firefox says 20kb
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Posted: 12 November 2004 at 11:05am |
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Oh looks like I was getting the wrong number. Scratch that comment then.
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