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Good? Any criticisms, errors, typos? Tried to keep simple in this one.

Edited by Gullanian

Yes I agree with Mart, there should be a demo. I WILL Not ever purchase software unless I can demo it first.

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iAXX ASP Live Support is software designed to be run on your website. It enabled potential customers to ask your company questions, in real time. Let's face it; no matter how many details you write about a product on your site, customers will always have more questions. This is when ASP Live Support helps out. It enables those questions to be answered instantly.

Customers regularly leave commercial websites because they either:
    1.    Can't find the answer to the question they want
    2.    Can't find enough details about a product they are interested in
    3.    Don't have the time to send an email or make a phone call

You can increase your sales by picking up on these customers by offering them a new, exciting, easy to use medium for communicating with your company.

ASP Live Support will benefit small and large companies alike. The software caters for unlimited numbers of operators, and unlimited numbers of customers asking questions.

ASP Live Support increases confidence levels in customers, and can lead to higher sales by providing a solid web-based integrated support system for customers to ask their questions.

Download the Microsoft Word document on how your company can benefit (45kb)

Not being an english major but I would more write it like:

iAXX ASP Live Support is a web-based software product (an application). It enables potential customers, to ask your company questions in real time. Let's face it; no matter how much information you give about any of your products, customers will always have additional questions. This is where ASP Live Support could help you out. It enables you to have those questions answered instantly.

Customers regularly leave commercial websites because they either:
    1.    Cannot find the answer to any questions they might have
    2.    Cannot find enough details about a product they are interested in
    3.    Do not have the time to send an email or make a phone call

You can increase your sales by (don't make that promise "ASP Live Support could increase sales by") offering additional support to existing and potential customers by offering them a new, exciting and easy to use medium of communication.

ASP Live Support can benefit small and large companies alike. The software caters for an unlimited number of operators and clients (customers).

With ASP Live Support the confidence level of a customer can be increased and can lead to higher sales by providing a solid web-based support solution.

Download the Microsoft Word document on how your company could benefit (45kb)

I corrected a few errors and rewrote some stuff that just did not sound professional. You should not make promises you do not have influence over, do not promise that it increases sales but the ability that it can help.

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Those pages load sloooow. Also, first time I clisked the link, I got the first page showing the red highway(?) receeding into the distance. Second time... no highway. 3rd and 4th time, got the highway... 5th time, no highway again.

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